hows this poem?? honest reviews.?

I wish you'd let me sing this, it's really good!♥

The first line I think is my favorite because it makes you think and reflect off of it as if you live that life and you know exactly how you are feeling.

The next stanza is also good because I love the line " All the stares around, just keep pushin' me down" because almost everyone can relate to that. This poem has emotion and feeling in it, earlier today I read something this girl put how she doesnt know what to do people look at her like she's mentally retarded, she's labeled as weird and awkward and she feels that she doesn't belong, that she can't be herself, instead she's someone that she really is not. I really like this, it's definitely touching. I think you should post this in some kind of poetry contest, you could get far with this. In my honest opinion, at least.♥

Way Back Home

I'm lost in an empty street,

Can't find a proper place to (fit) my feet;

Not even a corner where i belong,

Can't find (nor) a thought to make me strong.

Oh! i wish find a way to lead me home..

I put hesitating foot forward,

Can't help feeling like a coward;

All the stares around, just keep pushin' me down,

And i (can) do nothing, no courage to even return a frown.

Oh! I wish find someone to lead me home!

Waiting for the end of it all,

Trying to find someone, break my fall;

Trying to find a place where i fit in,

Trying to smile while my world does spin.

Oh! wish i could find a way back to my home!

Home....

Where I feel I belong,

Where I feel I can do nothing wrong,

Where I feel everything goes right,

Where I feel the sun shines bright.

Oh! wish I could lead me back to my home!

its very nice, it has also symbolic meanings in it

for me here home is not only a home where we live but also the place where our thoughts live

there can be much drawn from this write

i would say it 9/9

love care and blessing

Zahid from Pakistan

i like it very much but the last stanza is not what i liked alot but its great...

it seems like youve gone through alot and your trying to express out your emotions =)

Wow, what a great poem. I really like it.

That's Really good.

You are talented.

5/5 Stars...

Good thinking ....

This is an excellent poem! This is the best poem I have read!!!!!

hi.well done.if u have written this then keep on writing its very nice.

I like it.

d peom is great.......about homesickness???

no.....m joking.....its pretty gud.....i like it.....simple.....n dts its beauty.....