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Poets, have you ever felt like this? Will you C/C please?

Have you ever felt your muse sleeps

or has deserted you

for better climes

as you struggle, awkward

through inane

rhythm and rhyme?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TtGY4G7II6s

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  • 10 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Great song this is one I would like HH, to sing I'll have to tell him.

    'have I ever felt my muse sleeps', 'not a sound in blissful piece ?

    I'll unlock my mind as I day-dream I'll clime every Mountain

    and reach for the sky, follow every rainbow until we find are dream

    A dream that will last all the day's and days ..the hills are alive with the sound of HH and the misic he sings ,, ''Oh Sorry I don't know what got into me there just some insparashenal feeling of poetry in the making .. HuGG SSS :)

    No I don't think I have , My poetry just gets better and better ..How are you? nice poem, thanks

    for bringing out mrhythmhm and rhyme...

  • H S
    Lv 6
    10 years ago

    Yes, although with muses there is always the suspicion that they have abandoned you because of your failing to pay proper attention to them.

    But most things that we learn in life we learn either from failure, or from the slowly-learned lessons of repeatedly mediocre performance. Not everything is a matter of being the dry tinder that a spark from somewhere or other catches.

    Unfortunately, and very unfairly, Natasha B always reminds me of James Blunt, who seems to have been a very competent soldier, but whose music I can't abide.

    FWIW, I find lines 4 and 5 a little awkward. I'd change awkward to awkwardly, but I'm not sure what is niggling me about line 5. Hey, it's a dark, wet June day and it feels as if the east coast of Scotland is about to sink; I need more serotonin.

    Overall, I like it, but as often with your shorter pieces, it feels like a fragment of something bigger.

  • 10 years ago

    My muse has never really been one of rhyme anyway so that's that a problem....my muse seems to abandon me when I am very content, but rejoins me in times like now. So I guess for me it's the opposite, my muse abandons me for worse "climes" :)

  • ?
    Lv 6
    10 years ago

    ahaha not just poets.

    Damn that is one hell of a great song.

    Thank you so much for that link.

    Better than any medicine any pill can bring

    be the confirmation that I, or you

    just as much as anyone else

    have the right to sing

    or not to sing

    WITHOUT QUESTION!

    regardless if anyone likes the song

    or not

    even if one isn't always pre-programmed

    and drugged up till they bebop and buzza be

    manageable and sweet as a whittle bird?

    as apparently more than horribly sadly

    way the hayho too many people would prefer to see

    while claiming they love or care and want

    only the best for thee

    or beautiful and tragic as Pilaf

    wrapped nice and pretty in a cute lil carafe

    of true love to mmmmm sift and sip please

    nice and slow

    till one be drunk as a sailor

    dancing, danzing at the speed of light

    to a sioux wheat gagong gaga rrrrrrrrrumba

    and we all be laughing and screamin

    YOHOHO AND AIYE KA LUM BAAAAAAA

    sounding more like a cacafunny of

    fluffanutter nuff said in your aiyiyi with a

    half baked whipped cream pie full of

    Jambolaya and disgusting ooey gooey

    snotty lookin and tasteless bean curd.

    And yes, si, neh, tak, we and oui!

    It often does mon ami, very much often feels that way

    as if sometimes, somehow as if I truly be sleepwalking

    through my fingers in so many ways and wheys

    aloud when allowed so we can

    fly up to the sun and moon

    or bounce around from cloud to cloud

    or crash and burn if we choose

    while never really cuttin loose any thing

    except more and more

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I9pn_P6ZaQk

    HOT DANG SAX!

    um and then we all go

    NOW BLOW BABY,

    BLOW?

    Haha, aya,

    On top of old smokey all covered with cheese

    I fear I lost my meata bollas along with my marbles

    way the hayho before I looked in your direction

    oh so long ago and your fiery hair nearly cut my

    corny ah um... but

    Happy Birthday to you too sweetheart

    as today is just the beginning of the rest of

    Source(s): um I dunno my lady In manibus fortuna but just looking at you it's quite plain to see your fortune is in more than just your hands and the great part is, you wouldn't even have to get on your knees. And I can't stop laughing at the very thought how I am pretty sure you would do more than excellent in the health care industry. Aya, hospitals can save lots of money and old peoples lives by hiring you to just walk buy and flash a smile instead of using them electric boogaloo heart jumper cable thingies. Translation: Good mornin to you too Bella baby firewalker. Thanks for the great song. I love it more than you will ever know. C*
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  • Nat
    Lv 7
    10 years ago

    Thanks for the link. I wasn't familiar with this composer/singer.

    I'm having that problem now, as I struggle with a poem.

    I have a split screen going now, your answer on the right,

    and the poem on Word-pad, languishing on the left.

    Oh, muse of the moon...enter my muddled mind and clear

    away the cobwebs.

  • 10 years ago

    Hi. Nice song, i enjoyed it. Sometimes i feel that my muse has abandoned me because i have abandoned it. This happens depending what is going on in my life, the good thing, is that it doesn't last to long, . Thanks for asking.

  • 10 years ago

    Oh yes, my muse been away for months already. If she shows up, I won't be able to recognize her. Your link is not available in my country.

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    we are all books to be continued to be written

    My muse only seems to come to me to relieve some days in the past.

    I cannot express myself how I want just hearing birds chirp and the sun beating down upon me.

    Source(s): Soc
  • ?
    Lv 7
    10 years ago

    aye, definately have

    its puts accross how it affects you

  • Luiza
    Lv 7
    10 years ago

    Yes, we all felt that way!

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