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Storm lay awake in wonder and worry. His smoke gray fur glistened in the moonlight. Slowly, he rolled over, just to see the rest of his pack silently sleeping. 'Can't sleep?' A wolf thought suddenly. Startled, Storm leaped up and turned around. 'Oh, sorry.' Midnight, the female alpha and Storm's mate thought. Without a word, Storm laid down, facing Midnight. With her coal black fur, it was nearly impossible to see her, despite the moonlight.

'I can't sleep either. Full moon, I guess.' Midnight thought, yawning until you could see all of her perfect white teeth. Storm was silent for a moment, staring out over the beautiful lake, glistening with a faint orange color from the sky. 'Almost morning,' Storm thought, sighing. 'What are we going to do? The pack is over populated, and we can't hunt fast enough to feed all of the pack. I think we'll have to take two wolves out...the weakest ones, anyways.'

Midnight was shocked at what she was hearing...the two weakest ones were her 1 year old pups! 'No, Storm! We can't kick out Wind and Coal! They are our pups. They need us.' Midnight objected. Fuming, Midnight hastily got up and trotted into the thick brush, entering the dark forest. 'Wait.' Storm thought, running after Midnight. For awhile, there was no trace of her, but finally, he saw her sitting on a rock by the shore of the lake. Slowly, Storm walked up to Midnight and lay down. He could easily tell that Midnight was still mad. She didn't even look at him.

'I can't believe you'd do this to our daughter and our son. Wind is fast...she could hunt for us. Coal is fast and has good fighting skills. If he could get a little stronger, he can be a Delta Fighter. He can protect us. Please don't single them out of the pack.' Midnight pleaded, gazing into Storm's eyes. For once, Storm was speechless. Usually, he had some "smart" comment in him, but this time, he didn't. He just laid there...not daring to look in Midnight's eyes, for the fear he had of her kicking his butt.

Quickly and quietly, Storm thought, 'They're leaving...and that's the final word. Good night.' Storm promptly got up and ran back to the pack. Midnight sat there in shock, her mind filling with questions, starting a whirl pool. How can he do this? Will I ever see my pups again? Why would he do this? How can I save my pups? Will they be okay? Midnight's head began to hurt. She didn't bear to think of a life without her pups. Still shocked, Midnight got up and ran back to the pack. Slowly, she crept toward her sleeping pups, careful not to wake them. 'Goodbye. I will miss you deeply.' She thought, two tears landing exactly on their noses.

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  • 10 years ago
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    aww i love it :) its really touching & sad, poor coal & wind. I really enjoyed reading this paragraph, i really want to know what happened next. Good Job, you have an amazing story:)

    Keep writing stories & dont let anybody down...

  • klink
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    I desire that you just dont brain however i could love to broaden at the origins of the tale a bit of; Its a exceptional tale written via the deobandi i.e wahabbi, salafi folks within the UK funded via Saudi and taught from Saudi Imams, i do know them good as a organization, here's thier ideals on different matters: All females must put on niqab and put on black, that is not anything perscribed via Islam All females must keep residence and no longer paintings external of the residence (therefore why i used to be referred to as to be with the spouse of a sheikh while she was once so ill within the medical institution due to the fact she was once 28 years historical and not ever were round a male instead of husband or father so she didnt know the way to manage the male physician who was once looking to keep her and her infants existence) There isn't any Tasawwuf (Information concering the conventional Islamic technology of self-benefit and spirituality) its pushing a worry Allah SWT schedule, Its no longer Islam to worry, its Islam to like. If it was once as much as those folks there could be no Sayyida Zaynab mosque and Egypts variant and knowledge of Islam could be very extraordinary, compliment be to Allah swt that there'll consistently be folks in Egypt and the relaxation of the sector so that you can be by contrast ideology. Please any person dont misunderstand what im pronouncing, im no longer pronouncing that Islamic dawah isn't a exceptional suggestion and movement however the type of Ideology and the have an impact on of that on any society and folks is what demands to be measured. I for my part wouldnt love to reside in an international run via the Saudi- wahabbi schedule of Islam. Allah is aware of great

  • 10 years ago

    wow. thats good. really good. sad too. a bit like "Twilight" at the beginning (thee whole "communication by thought" thing) but its amazing.

    try to let me know if you publish it. i would read it.

    i would guess that the main characters are wind and coal? and it tells about their lives banished from the pack? thats just what im guessing, but i like it a lot!

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    YES! THAT SOUNDS AWESOME!!!

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