please critique this rap for me?

I wrote a song, it's rap and I want you to critique it. Honesty is appreciated, I'm new to this and would like constructive criticism. Rate it outta 10 if you dont want to put in effort. Or flame me if you have some time on your hands, I'm open to anything. Thanks for your time.

Ask me if ill smoke another pound this summer

Ill tell ya you can count on it like a number

On the beach in a flower shirt like im rango

Rollin up weed that taste like peach and mango

Away on vaca headed to the tropics

If we don’t look fresh then please adjust your optics

Head to toe we’re trendin like topics

They can’t understand what we’re on though

I’m goin over their heads like my condo

So to them I’m still a john doe

But they’ll get it soon like pronto

Im too big for the sea these fish are in

Set to detonate like nitroglycerin

With ice cold words doin cryosurgery

Freezer burn verbs to the third degree

Im jack the dipper on a murder spree

Status says im catchin rays in key west

In paradise youd think im chillin with jesus

Southern kids on the lowdown

But not white trash or low brow

They cant spit like we know how

So youre about to have a meltdown

My word play got your mind wrestling

I trip it up like mescaline

Born with shiny balls guess I got that sexy gene

Im livin the life call me Charlie sheen

Plan to live the dream to the grave

I never gone through a phase

At any age see me in the fast lane

Leave the rest behind with *** pain

Check the swag flip flops and cargos

Sippin mad dog on the shores of key largo

Chillin with a nice girl but shes a drunk bar hoe

So don’t act like you’ll be seein me tomorrow