critique this verse for me?

Live your life to the fullest man you gotta take it slow

Enjoying every minute cause the next you could go

Lookin forward to the future but I live for right now

So from the morning I’ll be blazing until it’s lights out

It’s why you’re stuck in traffic while I’m on a nice route

Chiefin seein them sights that’ll have me like wow

In the alps hittin trees getting sushi in the keys

If I can still breathe then I’m gonna live free

And now we got our own place to crash at

Wake up catch some rays and pass that

Watch try not to laugh and laugh back

Then doin microwave math for some kraft mac

On that fast track to ihop where I got fat stacks

Head home and sit back like that’s that

All day kickin it like karate kids gotta be stayin positive

We’re down to earth burnin like a comet is

Gimme credit for my class kids not givin a ****

Must be trippin on acid if you’re wishin him luck

If you don’t feel the dopeness then increase the dosage

I’m goin real explosive like devices in the postage

Now that I’m rippin they’re beginning to notice

I’m still sippin but spittin so focused

My boys are choppin up the reefer and watchin angry beavers

Goin longer than a wide receiver we are truly high achievers