Song I wrote?! Opinions!? ?

Hey there! So I really have been working on a song for my boyfriend (I'm the lead singer/song writer in his band and he's the drummer) and we usually play that rock stuff, but I also play acoustic guitar and when he comes over tomorrow night to pick up the band song I wrote, I want to play him this and sing it too him. He's a really awesome guy. I have a very soft voice and strong voice as well, so the stuff inside [ ] just tells you the tone of the lyrics and singing. Constructive criticism is welcome! Thanks!

[soft]

I looked at you,

Instantly knew,

That this wouldn't be the end of this

From that day

I just dreamt of everything we could ever be

Baby, just you and me

[medium]

From your smile

To your voice

Something about its just got me hooked.

Now just shut up,

Stop talking,

Can't you just kiss me in the rain?

Make my fairytales come true

CHORUS 

[Stong]

Baby the way you play your drums,

How they go boom boom

How you are just failing school

And I gotta tutor you

There's just no other words

No other words,

To describe you 

Than just you and me

[Medium]

Last night I spent countless hours

Thinking about our kiss

How we went for days without talking

Cuz the kiss just spoke for us

[Stong]

And all the times you called when I got mad

The times when I screamed

You just always stayed by me

Baby, just you and me

CHORUS

[Soft]

I love how you make me shriek 

When you come up and tickle me

How you hug me close and never let go

People said that it would never last,

But look who proved them wrong

Baby just you and me.

[Strong] 

I spend hours

Hours at a time

Thinking of your smile

And hearing your laugh

[Medium] 

But nothing really matters when 

[Soft]

it's just you and me.