Opinions on this new poem I wrote...?

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Its a little personal but its about a very close friend of mine.

Deep down I can feel
the struggle,
Knowing it'd never really be.
Can you see
How I truly feel for you?
Time keeps passing
As I sit and question myself,
Is this really possible
Can it all be so true?
Too many regrets
Except for that one day I was with you.
People might say I'm crazy
But I don't care,
How I feel is real and its
Not for them to judge.
If only I could have you once again
I'd prove my real deep
True love for you.

? · Accepted Answer

I am quizzical...very interested in the depth you have to examine the inexplicable emotions.Please don`t be held back... there`s a vision somehere within your quesion,rejoice! It`s brief and vey real and unadorned.You`ll do more - I`m qizzical here, so yo must have something in your talent to nourish by practice....fascinated.
Seems simple on the surface ... a holistic style, no less! More......Please.
?Unusual....intrigued

Anonymous · Answer

I like it a lot because it reminds me that you're desperate for the person that you love so very much. It explains the struggle to just be loved. It's powerful! Please write me

Anonymous · Answer

Its nice to me is not a poem just a love letter

? · Answer

how do you think about mine: its about this guy i like
jack
how come you cant see
that the feelings i have a real
real for you jack
for your love
for you crack and sack
i want your babys
i want your love
lets have the sex 
before you know that
im really a man

please tell me what you think of mine?!

Anonymous · Answer

to emo

? · Answer

very romantic. i like  :)
keep it up

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Opinions on this new poem I wrote...?

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