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So basically, the plot is a small group of orphans living on the streets find something while being scouted by the police one day..the only thing is, I can't decide what the orphans find! Can you help? D:

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I probab;y should mention, yes it is life changing.. :]

invertigoeuphoria · Accepted Answer

um well, they could:
- find "dirty money" decide to use it instead of turning it into the police, and be jumped by mafioso
-find a blood diamond that was illegally imported, and be chased around by greedy "devil may care" people 
-  find a cadaver, only to find out that all of the orphans are siblings, and the dead person is their father, who "slept around" with the town's, or cities women.

I can think of a lot more, but I need to know what kind of genre you're aiming for.

I Like U · Answer

do they find something that changes there lives? or just a random object that they could use to destroy the world. I guess they could find in a very old alleyway while running away fromt he police this random glass skull that they find near the hut of this crazy old ladies house. when one of the girls or boy pick it up she cries or maybe a drop  of blood falls onto the skull (she fell i guess) and then they say "I wish the police would just go away!" just talking to herself , but then the police really do dissapear and shes like cool and puts the glass skull into her pocket or whatever and its like a magical skull that the more sacrifice you give to it (like blood or tears) the bigger the wish u can make and then things follow up from there

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