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English boat advert, natives only please?
We're about to publish an advertisement for a sailing boat on an English magazine, can you please check it out? I'd like it to sound perfect, any suggestions will be greatly appreciated, thank you.
Carbon fiber construction (2010-2011), Nordic Mast with Park Avenue, Nitronic and PBO rigging, Holmatro Hydraulic System, North Sail 3DL main, genoa, stay sail, gennaker, code "0", bow thruster, water maker, Mastervoltgenerator 14kw, Volvo engine 140 Hp, ice maker, washing machine, two refrigerators and one freezer, clima combined system (air conditioner and heater), Master cabin at bow, two double aft cabins, crew cabin, toilet in all cabins, separate kitchen.
5 Answers
- Anonymous10 years agoFavorite Answer
Mostly fine. I'd just make these small changes:
"carbon fibre" - fiber is the US spelling.
"14 kW Mastervolt generator"
"140 HP Volvo engine"
"Clima combined system"
Source(s): Native UK English speaker / technical writer - Anonymous6 years ago
Non la compero perchè ha un buco che mi farebbe affondare.
- Anonymous5 years ago
Ripara quel buco, altrimenti la barca affonda.
- HomeboyLv 510 years ago
If it's an advertisement from which you aim to earn money, please pay a professional to check your language.
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- Anonymous10 years ago
natives
