Opinions on the poem I wrote recently - Untitled.?

I found you in the depths of my fantasies,,

Never paying attention to the physical you,

You strike me as a deformed idea originated in my dreams,

I miss you every second I don’t sleep.

A new love in my delusion amongst my heartbroken reality

Your smile dense, weighing a ton on my heavy heart

Your arms delightfully entrapping my shattered body,

Our lips touch and command my imprisoned inclination

I can't help but to smile at the sensuality that surrounds me,

Protects and rearranges to bring out the best in me.

Every inch of you screams beauty; i wonder if you ever notice.

I comment, but i never meant to make you blush, these "sweet" words flowing out of me are mere observations.

I promise to love you like i've never been hurt and give you my all- no matter what

Honest opinions only, thanks in advance :)