Part 4 *Can anyone Tell me What happened Last night? C/C?

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I opened one eye, rolled my head to the side and came eye to eye with
...OMG! the burning down my spine felt like hot acid
and I cringed at the taste of dead vermin in my mouth, 

I was laying on a pool table hugging a cue stick, wedged
between Lizzie and LC and the smell of bacon cooking was singing
my nasal hairs... 
my memory unclear of why or how I was where I was and what the point of this story 
even is. I just wanted to go home, I vaguely remember a food fight
and judging by the grouping of our bodies and my death grip on the cue stick 
I would wager I was trying to make peace in my own warped
individualist way,
Dave appeared grinning like the Cheshire cat on steroids and the gals
were showing signs of waking ... I wanted to get off the table, but I was wedged in so 
tightly I was unable to move and 
if I did not get up soon there was going to be a flood and some very Not pissed off, Pissed on
pool mates.

In case you have not figured this out yet,
I am fresh out of mouthwash, my toothbrush is AWOL and someone 
is singing Opera and the incessant buzz of chatter from so many people talking at once
is eating holes in my story 

I really do not do well in crowds 

will someone help me off this damn table and Dave, will you quit grinning before I have to slap that look off your ham!

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Please, don't ask me.
I'm not sure when I showed up, but I know where I was

Rosalinda · Answer

Hi. This sounds like you  were having a nightmare , keep the ink flowing strong words . Can't tell you what happened  last night I was too sick to have noticed.  I saw this poem and it made me think of so  many  things. I wish we all could lived in peace,  and learned how to accept  each others as we are  as long as we are not hurting any one.  Poignant message.

5 ft 7 Texas Heaven · Answer

This combined with others and Brians has become a fun morning from a night before, and events can get muddled. I'd be happy to give you a Piggie back ride.

Anonymous · Answer

I love your writing, just because it is you behind it, and your quill, of course. OK! When you write prose or stories, avoid the massive use of {I} word. I I I I I. Egoistical and empty. We in Greece invented this point of view, because we like red lights in harbors (lol). In any case, will you offer me a glass of wine? 
My waitress gave me 16 TD yesterday, before I got bored from her crop and deleted my A to Pandora. I am not holding grudges, I am reading my charismatic Greek poems, my English imperfect ones... So, truly, avoid the {I} words, and you 'll see improvement. The rest is between your cue stick and your friends. I woof you across land and water.
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I love you too!!!!

cassie58 · Answer

Oh Nancy. That sounds like one hell of a night you've just had. Are you sure you want to remember any of it girl? I might just forget it. Now I've got to work backwards because I've missed the other parts.

FREDO FROG · Answer

mm a lot of heaving breathing , you should have emergency supply of mouthwash . Reach into your pocket oops forgot your wedge / bring it on p 5

doe · Answer

Cheese you are one funny dude. This sounds like lifestyles of the rich and famous; what time is it on T.V.?

Thomas · Answer

Nancy

I am looking forward to Part 5

Bri

Luiza · Answer

Nice ideas!

PANDORA Πανδώρα · Answer

The morning after the night before...
Hmmm...not always a good memory...

Have you tried the hair-of-the-dog?...lol

the cheese whisperer · Answer

You can loosen your death-grip, dear...that's not a cue-stick.

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