Poem criticism? I'd appreciate it.?

what's wrong with it, i think it was great, very impressed. deep and touching. all poetry can't be about love, it's great cause you said what you feel and it shows, that's what great poetry should be, so keep up the great work.

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Nice

Wow, your poem is VERY deep. i'm not a big fan of poetry but i was extremely impressed! Well done, it's awesome! i seriously have no criticism, it portreys a strong message.

If I were your mom, and you gave me that; when you return home from school, you would find your bags and belonging outside the house. You can find yourself a new foster family.

F-

On the other hand, I am not your mom. If you were trying to describe your mom as a total *****, then you nailed it. Well done.

F+

deeep well what wasnt her intention and how could you make more complications

That is very touching. ;-)