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Is my little ditty poem clever or silly or thought-provoking or other?

Far afar so far away

So far away so far

Away afar away so far

Afar away so far away.

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  • Anonymous
    10 years ago
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    Personally, I enjoy it. It IS indeed thought provoking, I had to re-read it a few times to get it right.

    Well done.

    Answer my question? Perhaps?

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AgdK7...

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    I like it. Kind of funny and is provoking but, for me, not in a sexual way. But, I'm not sure if I would lead with that one :)

  • 4 years ago

    The alliteration is all real executed, besides the undeniable fact that it type of feels extra like you wrote what you wrote as a thanks to reason alliteration. that is not very exciting and per chance you ought to diminish down on the alliteration as a thanks to characteristic extra activity and humour to the poem.

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