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Is my poem good? Please read/ rate?
Hi, I'm 15 and this is the first poem I've ever written. Please rate and give any opinions and tips you have to improve my writing.
She sits there
Weeping
Swallowed by her chair
She sits there
Lost
Her husband just gone
Her daughter; frustrated
She doesn't understand
She doesn't understand
No one understands.
From living in sin
To living alone
God is her only company
She's forever alone
She sits there
Weeping, Lost and Alone
Her husband just gone
Never to come home
PS I already asked this on a different profile, just looking for more answers! Thanks!
3 Answers
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
I love it, your poem uses figurative language beautifully. Just a suggestion-publish?
Hope I helped😊
- Anonymous9 years ago
i like it, but hwne you say forever alone i can only think of the meme/stick figure thing
- Anonymous9 years ago
Yes, it sounds very nice. :)
