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Could I get some criticism on this short video clip?
I'm new in the videography world, I just need you to criticize my first video clip that I made (criticism could also be constructive.) What did I do right or wrong?
Your help is much appreciated thank you!
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2 Answers
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
I get it, brothers at play and its fun to watch. I would say write up some more dialog or use a bit of improv. And use a tripod for a few shots. I liked the beginning when the kids just runs up and throws everything off the table lol
- 9 years ago
hmmmmm. Well to begin, it went on wayyyyyy too long. why did it need those minutes to tell the story? It could have done with a few tripod shots. there wasnt enough cuts (slowing the pace down again). And the narrative wasnt very clear. Felt abit anti climatic at the end. Not something i would want to watch again.
The colouring was nice i thought, and i liked the effects. Dont give up!
