Can you help me make the last line of my poem for school?

Question

This is my poem:

  Music is part of my life,
It's the one thing that makes me feel alive.
No matter what it could be,
All music directs me.

Music teaches me everything that I do,
After hearing the words, you know it fits you.
Without music I wouldn’t know what I would do,
When I'm feeling sad it's the only thing I can go to.

Music is my life,
As I listen, it builds me higher.
Whatever emotion you are feeling, 
Whether it’s happy, sad, anger or fear,
Just turn it on and listen to the words you hear.

For me music could never get old
(the last line would go here and the last word has to ryhme with old)

Can you help me complete the last line?

V.O.R. · Accepted Answer

For me music could never get old
Without it, my life would feel cold. 

(or be cold or seem cold)



P.S.
In the line 'Without music I wouldn't know what I would do'  change it to 'Without music I wouldn't know what to do'

Shannon G · Answer

For me the music could never get old
It'll be vibrant forever, strong and bold.

Anonymous · Answer

for me music is already sold. idk i've nvr really been  a poet myself

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Can you help me make the last line of my poem for school?

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