How does this relate to your feeling?

This is incredible.

I love the haiku format. Your use of color and wind show a change in seasons so very well, and the metaphor is deep with wisdom as you subtly personify the leaves.

It is perfect.Unexpected and powerful!

How does it relate to my feelings? Hmmm. I don't fear the future, though it may not be the one I want, but what will be will be. Like your poem. The trembling yellow leaf reeks of fear, yet its future is designed by what it is. This is so good.

Thank you for sharing this delight.

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It's completely opposite of my mood this great new morning.

Thoughts of spring and summer romance keep me young.

Wind may mean a cross country trip to meet someone.

yellow? nasty old people,places and things.

A well composed, thought provoking Haiku.

You hold to the nature theme

and convey a depth of feeling

each reader will interpret

in their own, personal way.

I like the way this Haiku

feels "all of one piece."

Ok for you I will make an appearance. This is lovechild.

There is a safer better place to post poems:

http://s4.zetaboards.com/Firebrand/topic/8833080/1...

you will be most welcome there

Summer is over and it makes me sad.....