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Fulfill my imagination. Turning tricks on my fantasies, you appear before me.
Dream of me while you lay your head on me. Layout your dreams to me while you put your arms around me. Everything feels so naturally gratifying to me. Under the spell of your heart, so, just promise your love for me. Four million feelings a minute, every one so new to me. Hundreds of thousands’ of I love you’s contort and confuse me- its always unexplainable what you do to me. Take my hand so you don’t lose me. Hold me close so you can heal me. I’m so forgetful until your body’s with me. I’ll let my guard down so you can feel me. Be my everything and I’ll be right where you need me - physically, mentally and spiritually. When you’re hurt, escape to me. I promise every part and piece of me.
And you reveal the artist in me.
Find my rhythm, follow my frequencies. I call on you to tranquil me. Every touch ignites me, illuminating me in your beauty. Lighting attraction, I pull you to me until I’m over flooding, head over heels, with a storm underneath me. Every reflection and discourse penetrates the recesses of my mind, creating a unique sanctuary. Drive me further, cursing me with your secrets and insecurities while your lustrous voice promises intimacy. Each breath tells me how unmindful of pleasure you are until you get with me. I’ll give you all of me, if you trust me. Subtract the odds in me until you understand my body is an extension of my honesty.
Relax and Relinquish your clarity. Lose yourself in an attempt to understand “we”
My voice drenched in romance, every note I hit wrapped in compassion. Patient understanding deluges my authentic interest. Entwine my inclination and face me with dauntlessness.
Embrace my lips to immerse your love in me.
Hold me until I feel your urgency. Eyes’ rolling back takes a toll on me. Encore, ecstasy threefold. Passionate peaks promise I’ve hit perfection to remind you of me; Scratches on your back to remind you to always come back to me.
Beautiful, you're all i see. I hope you find everything you need, in me.
I love you (:
2 Answers
- Happy HiramLv 79 years agoFavorite Answer
It would be more readable with more line breaks, particularly at the rhyming words. Otherwise it expresses the emotions well.
- Anonymous4 years ago
Its not the best iv heard bt the reality you made it makes it a hundred thousand circumstances better than any poem they are going to of ever heard. very good nonetheless. and it sounds heartfelt it incredibly is what counts the main :)...