Another attempt to haiku,please C/C.Thanks?

While they follow a typical 5-7-5 so often used, and not to go against you, or two friends already above me, I would have changed a couple things.

L 1, Twigs bothers me, only if given the fact that a Bonsai is not only a dedication in it's tending, but a spiritual experience, and pruning, a major goal. Twigs sounds like a part denuded, which wouldn't fit the rest of the first haiku.

L 2, Soon new buds appear and spread. Just sayin.

L 3, affirm some new life, again just sayin, and "some might seem a bit too abstract?

Gale

L 1, The lamp shakes, unlit

L 2, Trees whisper before the gale.

L 3, Soon the night will howl

Forgive me, I so dislike doing this, and they are yours, so pay no attention to me.

I like both these Haikus.

You have your "nature" element in each.

(and 17 beats of 5 - 7 - 5.

"Gale in the night" captures the tenseness of

of storms at night.

Your idea of a Bonsai Tree is great.

One element you might want to consider

is how agonizingly slowly they grow

Bonsai seems the same

Though we yearn, the eye discerns

Barely any change.

"Gale" is very good.

"Bonsai" could explore

this unusual tree's potential

a bit more.

I won't even attempt these type of poems.

My mind doesn't stop that quickly.

I like the first one better.

As for form ,I am no expert..

Seems real good.

I like the second one best. You do haiku well.