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ttteo0328 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

Does this occur to you sometime? Please help.?

Struggling with a Love Poem

To bring the picture to your mind

I search the air for the correct scent

To get the words and syllabuses right

I `ve stirred my coffee till it spilled on my pants

I love you to the depth of my heart

But the words seem shallower through my pen

I set free my spiritual imagination

And light up all my passion

I love thee with a love

That seems to lose out

When I write them in a poem

And still somehow no one really understands.

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  • 9 years ago
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    This is a dear sweet love poem, not at all false or contrived.

  • Luiza
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    Poetry is like a struggle

    I search high and low

    For the perfect word

    And understand

    That life really is 99 percent

    Perspiration and only

    One percent inspiration!

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    Highly interesting, your shades of perspectives run very deep....i like it

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