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Ruby
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Ruby asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

Read my (very) short poem please? "Glitter Turns to Dust"?

That picture on the wall

Is mocking me.

Our faces are made up and we're

Smiling.

The Smiles aren't fake;

They're Glittering.

(Oh what a shame it is).

Update:

Could you tell me what you thought about it or what it made you think of?

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  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
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    [Ghostly floss]

    Destiny is an evenness of attention

    a cause of synchronized emotions

    to travel routes of eternal blossoms

    to accompany my soul's extension.

    On solar tide in my ocean travels

    red roses blossom in surmised garden

    with her glance Atropos unravels

    solitude rules in my carried burden.

    Ghostly floss, a relentless rain cried,

    smiling symmetry, worlds of grievance

    Ghostly floss, where monodies abide

    on my icons of persecution distance.

    Copyright G. V. 2011

  • 9 years ago

    Okay ummm whats the question you looking to get a answer too

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