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ttteo0328
Lv 6
ttteo0328 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

I am on a Haiku fever, please C/C?

Haiku One

An abandoned hoe

A garden of weed and moss

A hobby no more

Haiku Two

Fly, float, soar and plunge

But from which tree does they come

Raining plum blossoms

Haiku Three

Watching the birds

Harvest after harvest

A weary scarecrow

Update:

Haiku Two-

L2-does to did ,Thanks

Update 2:

Haiku Two-

L2-does to did ,Thanks

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  • 5 ft 7 Texas Heaven
    Lv 7
    9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    I actually enjoyed them but I'm a brat so I have suggestions, or thoughts perhaps.

    # 1, L 3, I might have said, "hobby abandoned"

    # 2, L 2, "does"???

    # 3, My fave of all of them.

  • cassie58
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    It's good to try new things. First haiku is the one I like best.

  • THE BANNIBAL ONE
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    The first one is a good metaphor about dead flowers.

    Abandoned because any amount of love and caring

    did no good.

    bye...thats my next poem...thanks

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