by the way, wrote another song a while ago, forgot to put it up. opinion on this one as well?

rain to the narrow street falls

pressed against the city walls

silence echoes in the calls

from the streetlamps

I know the night will never stay

and so I wandered down the alleyways

by night alone, never day

to the harbor

water trickles from the docks

setting back my broken clock

but the daylight will forever stalk

my long, dark road

but the clock from the tower chimes

and I must pass delightful times

as the advertising slowly climbs

from the shop displays

and now the shops are open

and customers come hoping

try, but the city streets aren't coping

with all the people

with all the people

it's a folk-pop song, as is my genre. think of S&G.