finished another song recently. any opinions?

keep in mind that when you read these, they are not be of the genre you may be familiar with. these are vocal harmonies in a sort of urban folk-pop style, much like Simon and Garfunkel, my inspiration. anyways...

Floating across the winter

With the summer in my eyes

Fall has come to its demise

A path ago

Times are moving forward

A politician gives command

Lying his way to the stand

And nothing changes

A new age we are in

A new day we begin

But when we try to make a change

Nothing happens but the lies we arrange

Now a man, I was a boy

A broken family comes to haunt

Only innocence it will taunt

And nothing changes

I am older, I was young

My face is changing with my age

All that remains is my plague

in words now forgotten

A new age we are in

A new day we begin

But when we try to make a change

Nothing happens but the lies we arrange

And nothing changes