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Does this sound like a good book?
So I'm thinking of writing this book:
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Hannah is a 15 year old geeky comic book nerd. She has straight brown hair, brown eyes, and oversized glasses. She good at anything in particular. Emmalina (Em for short) is her 13 year old little sister. Em is pretty with wavy blonde hair and violet eyes. She is a very talented ballerina. Hannah and Em are very close.
One day, when Em is walking home from dance class, she is shoved into a white van, and then the van speeds away. Hannah is distraught. The police aren't much of a help (they live in a small town), so Hannah sets it upon herself to find Em.
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So what do you think? Is it any good? Or does it sound very typical?
Thanks, I appreciate any help!
I want to include this scene in it, when Hannah finds Em just as she gets stabbed
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I watched the knife enter her, I watched those beautiful violet eyes go dead right in front of me. "EM!" I screamed. "Em! You can't do this this to me! Em! No you can't die I love you too much!". By this this time I was on my knees, bent over her crumpled body. The masked figure had already disappeared into the shadows. "Okay", I told myself. "Stay calm, what would Wolverine do is this situation? (**Wolverine is a comic book charecter for those who don't know**) He would freaking pick her up and carry her to a hospital, that's what he'd do! No, no she's too heavy, I can't pick her up, I might injure her more". This seemed to help, thinking out the steps of what I was going to do in my mind. "Keep going, you can't let Em die on you!". My eyes teared up even more at this very thou
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- Anonymous9 years agoFavorite Answer
This sounds very typical.... Add some interesting and unique events to it and then it could be a good book.
Source(s): Personal opinion - 9 years ago
The white van part sounds to simple make it to where their walking home and a man pulls up in a car and asks them if they want a lift they say no and the man keeps asking and becomes distraught and decides to try to grab one of them............you take it from there.
- 9 years ago
You have good characters and relationships but it sounds sort of typical from what you told us. You should spice it up a little bit and figure out twists on how she gets her sister. (:
