what do you think of this song?

It's a quiet afternoon

The sun bakes bricks of red

The people know rest comes soon

As the sun sinks her holy head

The sun is crying

The air is grey

Her love is dying

She rains away

And like a feeling

She slowly fades

Giving the evening

A lonely shade

It is now a muted night

The restless air runs cold

I long for the morning's delight

Where breaks the rising gold

The sun is rising

The air grows warm

And unsurprising

It runs a swarm

A broken man

Rejoice today

We know we can

Curtain dismay

I look to see the rising sun

Rising above the morning's fog

Yet I know she hasn't won

For she soon fades to an epilogue

Sorry, not the genre you were probably expecting...I know. this is sort of an urban-folk thing, sort of like S&G for those who know that I'm talking about.