Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.

Is my poem scarey, silly, or just plain goofey fun or none of the above (rate and comment)?

Twisted and creepy, the troll he does snarl

He lives with his mother and his name is Carl

His mother is pretty and his father is long gone

But has a pet gator whom he calls Ron.

Carl wanders the street but mainly at night

He likes to scare people into a big fright

They run and scream and cry and hide

As carl shakes his fists from side to side.

One time ago Carl came up to an old man

The man wasn't scared, his name was Stan

The old feller had his seen a lot of scarey things

And Carl wasn't as bad as a dog with bat wings

They both became good friends, two peas in a pod

Stan liked lamb and chicken and Carl preferred cod

One day Stan got sick and died a few days later

And Carl, like a good mate, fed Stan to his gator.

7 Answers

Relevance
  • 9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    It's goofy fun. Really, I mean it, it's quite funny :)

  • 9 years ago

    It was a goofy poem but it could have a possibly deeper meaning behind it. Carl could represent how one feels people perceive him to be. At the end when Carl feeds Stan to his gator could show that Carl isn't a type of person who takes friendship's seriously. I am most probably looking way deep into the poem though lol =)

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    this is awesome! it suits to all generations! but all listen to it with different ears! it does have a different meaning behind it. older people will look for that in the song. while its still goofy, the last verse gave me chills honestly! you're awesome at rhymes, so it is not that hard to remember. I honestly CAN see how this will become one of those children haunting stories! :) amazing job! keep up the work :)

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    I am quaking in my boots! but it is from a paroxysm of laughter and not fright...giggle

    I love the names in this poem. Somehow in their absolute ordinariness, they strike me as hilarious. Stan the gator...hahahahaha

  • How do you think about the answers? You can sign in to vote the answer.
  • ?
    Lv 4
    4 years ago

    Yours is a poem no words can describe. My suggestions: a million And whilst he escapes from the penitentiary of devil. The plant life of aroma will banish 2.No soot can darken, no fire can burn; are you able to wager its a flower:? 3Filled with candy scent & exhilaration honey nonetheless no thorns encompass, And no bugs touch , it is the flower, The flower of "Love".

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    lol its great loved the end XD... its good

  • 9 years ago

    made me laugh .. thanks

Still have questions? Get your answers by asking now.