Another Three Minute Poem: Will You Forgive Me?

Good poem, but you made me hungry. Darn it! lol

adeline_cosine

My lady, I just read a beautiful poem about perfect love, which, in the end, came from another realm or galaxy and was not of this world.

Then I am blessed and laid to rest by your short arrangement, and I must say it is very comestible.

Imperect love, the kind that we exude, is passionately tasteful to my buds, because of its flaws, its mistakes, its trials and tribulations, its conflicts and resolve, and its indefatigable endurance to stay the course, even when ones love changes.

O imperfect love, lest you be any more or less than a condiment or wedge of cheese.

Bravo my darling on a superb poem.

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It was a fast food recipe

A cup of Coke ,a Fiah Burger maybe

And French fries ala carte

But it wasn't greasey

It is something passionating and yummy

Certainly a nice peom indeed

He couldn't have been a mature wedge of cheese Adeline if he failed to realize the importance of the condiments. I've never written a three minute poem in my life. Well done you.

I usually have

an egg

on toast, perhaps a dollop

of marmalade

...and push the cheese to the side

but I really like your three minute poem

it cuts like butter

and sits nicely on the sideboard

I thought the poem had a lot of merit on explaining the worth of the characters in the love affair. i like it very much.

Its beautiful and so romantic :) Nice poem You should write a collection and get them published on kindle . Best of luck

You made me laugh.

A nice spicy piece of good humour.

That was cute and uplifting. Not complicated. Like everything else.

It was great! I really liked the metaphors in it. Good job!