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grandma asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

How Do You Like This Poem?

Look Up,For Your Redemption Draweth Nigh

By Julie S. Cave

He's the mighty warrior, the King of Kings.

He is my Savior, the master of my everything.

I once was sinking deep in sin.

He washed me up and made me whole again.

He left his home up above.

To come to this earth and show us His love.

He said He loves us,that salvation is free.

All you have to do is ask of Me.

He told of His Father, and things to come.

He said He is the Saviour, the only one.

He shed His blood for your sin to pay.

So you would be ready on that judgement day.

Peace from the Father.Peace from the Son.

Peace from the Holy Spirit. The three in one.

I hope to see you, God bless you all.

Be ye ready when the Father sounds the call.

Look up, for your redemption draweth nigh.

Look up, to the Master, where one day we fly.

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  • 9 years ago
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    I could see it being put to music.If you could try something like that and see what you can come up with. Good job.

  • 9 years ago

    I think it's good

  • 9 years ago

    I like turtles. <---- now this is a good poem.

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