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Can anybody correct the mistakes in the following sentences?

My interests

I love both philosophy and English. I am working towards becoming a philosopher and literary man as well. I also love tennis and I am a big fan of Maria Sharapova. I am a cosmopolitan in my ideology and outlook. And I believe that philosophy should transcend the ideologies of class, religion, nationality and many more barriers in order to benefit the humanity as a whole.

My favorite thinker

Frankly speaking , Philosophy is the place where my heart is. There are many great thinkers whom I like the most . Among them Bertrand Russell is my first choice. I love his analytic power, scientific and emotional understanding of the topics. His books deal with a rich variety of subjects.

More about Bertrand Russell : http://users.drew.edu/jlenz/brs.html

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  • 9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Why is a correction required? Seems perfect to me (if you choose to ignore the construction that you have many philosophers as your 'the most' liked ones).

  • 9 years ago

    Bertrand Russell is your first choice? Change to 'favorite.' Capitalize Tennis and philosophy. Seems to be perfect from there. :)

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