Can anybody correct the mistakes in the following sentences?

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Two most important things : 
 There  are  two  most  important  things  that  have  been  driving  the  humanity  towards  progress.  They are:
- To love and to be loved 
- To know and to be known


I need a girl friend
 I am 6 feet 4 inches tall. I am an Indian citizen. I am very much interested in making friends with 6 feet tall and beautiful girls and one day I may marry one of them. I insist on height because I am much taller than an average Indian. Everybody in my society identifies me with my height . Shorter girls look ugly standing beside me. So, I should marry only a tall girl who is not below 5 feet 10 inches ( between 180cms and 190 cms ) height and she should have charming looks. So, if you meet the above conditions and interested in me, you can contact me at englishvenu@yahoo.co.uk  or at www.facebook.com/tallvenu

crrllpm · Accepted Answer

There are no mistakes in your 2 sentences to correct. However, the remainder of your post is spam. Yahoo! Answers is not a lonely hearts club.

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There's a typographical error in the word tranform which must be develop into. Do not over use the phrase English, for the reason that you could have already used the "it" then using the word English is being redundant. From the sentence. I have diminished my weight to 80 kgs from 96 kg, it can be better to assert i have reduced my weight from ninety six to 80 is extra right.

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Can anybody correct the mistakes in the following sentences?

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