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Can anybody correct the mistakes in the following paragraphs?

Why don't I believe in Astrology?

I don't think our fate is decided by the planets and stars so distant from us. Man is the maker of his own destiny. There is nothing beyond this universe. Moreover, Astrology is not a science. Everything preached in its name is not only non-sense but fraud as well.

Why do I love Maria Sharapova ?

I have many reasons for liking Maria . She is a tall ( 6'2") and beautiful girl. She doesn't look as ugly as the negro players that America has been producing. And, I am proud to say that Indians are true admirers of beauty and I feel proud to be one among them. I always want to select the best for me as others do. Until now, I haven't had any girl friend. Do you know why? All the girls who tried to have relationship with me were either ugly or too short. If I find any girl who is as beautiful and tall as Maria, I will certainly start a relationship.

What is love?

The love feeling that happens among teenagers is generally a result of the secretion of different hormones. So, my dear young men, beware of the feeling until you reach mental maturity and emotional stability. As far as I know, marriage is a great social institution which gives us the license to torture or to be tortured by the opposite sex. According to many great psychologists, sex is not at all essential for healthy living. Sex is fundamentally a mind-born rather than a physical necessity. Lead a happy life with healthy habits

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  • 9 years ago
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    Sorry to say but unfortunately there is no one to help you. I have also faced difficulty in grammar and i requested ppl here to help me but no one came forward. People like to answer silly questions like "your first kiss" or "would he come back"....but no one is willing to help someone seriously. So i recommend you to take help from a teacher

    I am sorry I can not help because I am from Pakistan which is also a non English speaking country but all the best may be you would find someone who can help you :)

    By the way I did not like your answer about Maria Shrapova ....Because I dont like tall girls but I like cute little girls like Rani Mukherjee...Isn't she pretty?

    Source(s): From a non english speaking country...Pakistan
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