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it is for a descriptive essay. i am going to write about going on a missions trip after hurricane katrina to help rebuild houses and describe the wreckage i saw. any suggestions?
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- MercyLv 79 years ago
Hurricane Katrina was the deadliest and most destructive Atlantic hurricane of the 2005 Atlantic hurricane season. It was the costliest natural disaster, as well .
- clepperLv 45 years ago
to really see if it fairly works, it would want to help to work out the finished first paragraph. Your argument isn't clean. "...reflect and set the tone for student existence" is imprecise. per chance there are too many metaphors in a row; it desires something concrete. You bypass from the reflect to a lifeless ringer for the school as a united states/ community. also, using "community" two times makes it awkward. i do not comprehend what to signify as a revision because i do not comprehend the theory of your argument (that athletic courses create a sense of community?). i desire this does no longer sound too complicated. it really is demanding to guage it without context.
