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Can anybody correct mistakes in the paragraph?

My brother is my strength...

My brother, Rambabu, is one of the real forces behind my revival. Though he is three years younger to me, he has been providing constant support to all my endeavours. Without his helping hand, I would have achieved nothing. My brother is my real strength.

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  • 9 years ago
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    I think it is a great sentiment. I would omit the first line.

    My brother, Rambabu, is the strongest force behind my revival. Although he is three years younger than me, he has provided constant support to all my endeavours. I would have achieved nothing without his helping hand. My brother is my real strength.

  • 9 years ago

    My brother is my strength...

    My brother, Rambabu, is one of the real forces behind my SURVIVAL. ALTHOUGH he is three years younger THAN I AM, he has been providing constant support IN WHATEVER I TRY TO DO. Without his helping hand, I would have achieved nothing. My brother is my real strength.

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