Can anybody correct the mistakes in the following para?

I dont like flaunting my caste at the end of my name. There is nothing great or useful in the castes and religions of human society. Besides I firmly believe that castes and religions are the main culprits in perpetuating human misery and sorrow

Hope that helps

I don't like giving my caste after my name, there is nothing great or useful to be gained by it.

I firmy believe that these caste and religions, are the main cause of perpetrating the human misery and pain in our society.

I hope this, in some way helps?

there's a typographical mistakes in the word tranform with the purpose to make certain on to be commerce into. do no longer over use the be conscious English, because that the you've gotten offered already used the "it" then making use of the word English is being redundant. From the sentence. i have decreased my weight to 80 kgs from 96 kg, that is larger to declare i have dwindled my weight from 96 to 80 is extra wonderful.

i have read and re-read your paragraph and have no idea what you are trying to say. Sorry.

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