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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

Can someone help me with this poem I wrote?

Thoughts, Opinions, Advice, and Additions would be helpful?

The Being with Three Hearts.

The three cameras that

yield

three variform perceptions

Discordant and Antagonistic

These Three Triangular Tales

of Blue , Red, and Yellow.

Crazy, Wrathful, and anything but mellow.

And nothing like your ordinary fellow.

Update:

You are right- it is very cryptic.

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago
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    You need to let the reader know what this symbolism is referring to - as it is now, very cryptic.

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    G

    Three Hearts

    Three cameras

    Of

    Discordant perceptions

    Triangular Tales

    Blue , Red, and Yellow.

    Disturbing, un-mellow.

    Nothing like a good fellow.

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