First off, last line's a joke HEHE C/C?

Life is a one way street....

finding a friend on the road

is merely chance

......

walking together is the challenge

I have had a few friends on Yahoo Answers who changed their screen names and profile pictures so many times, that I didn't know who they were ariginally.

I still love the wild Lovechild ramble.

That's the second C, if you need the first others are better than I.

Thank you.

Edit - perhaps I should note that wild is a wonderful property to have in your poems. I hope you never lose it. I categorised wild along with free.

I love the work, "amok". Used it recently in another answer here. For some reason, YA/P is often amok-ish, but it is still road worthy.

Clever be you art thou! :)

I am always so confused.

Funny, when I see ''You cannot view your question at this time.. I always think ''O, NO what have I done now .. and I slap my wrist I've made some dumb mistakes but that's me I can't write a poem without three or more .. I as funny when you were Ben and Ben was you .. I Still don't know how you do that .. Great poem LC , I need friends I've made and now they're known

by the MISTAKES .. and I love them x @ you and others xxx

HA<<HA,,,A nice funny poem to wake up to.

It's wonderful,thanks for making us see humor in poetry.

which should be the point more often.some though seem to be grouchos.

byeeexxx

I enjoy 'occasional verse' - poetry which is commitedly, and facetiously, upoetic. I took considerable pleasure in the nonchalance of this piece - its chattiness and the way that it doesn't try too hard because it could care less.

It is a delicious piece of casual yackety. So I found it even more challenging than I might have that the metre keeps breaking down so spectacularly.

Your first three lines are regular, and your fourth very nearly so: my ear has got used to heroic couplets. When the metre breaks, it is like having a straw poked in my ear.

I'm not saying that poking your readers' ear with a straw is always wrong - but it seems out of place in such lightweight - fun - poetry (even just a little bit mean).

I wish you'd fix the metre. But if you won't, it's still a decent piece of work.

Missy

Milady, I dub thee Dame Lovechild, now an honorary member of the Order of the Knights Templar, but officially a knight. You are no longer a retainer or a sergeant, as your skills and sapience have proved you are more than worthy. You will be the first of many woman I hope, but until then you shall be at my side at all times, acting as my assistant. Take heed, for there will come a day where you will be free of this charge, and will lead your own order. You need not flail for purchase anymore. You have made it.

My Dame, you do not make dumb mistakes, only smart ones. Always remember that.

Congrats

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I hope someday I get to read the tale

but that it has a Disney end

I enjoyed the 1st comedian tale..made me snort.. 2nd one exchange into additionally somewhat humorous besides the undeniable fact that it exchange right into somewhat like the third..rest room humor... the fourth one i did no longer get... anywayz this is humorous no longer interior the great haha point besides the undeniable fact that it could cheer you up...