Poll: Is this Nice or Not Nice?

I just love these lines. Thanks for sharing.

All I understood was Hi and I'm thinking Apna Banaya means Apple and Banana.

I have a feeling this is "not nice".

Very nice! Good job!

"Chundh shay-ur urz hai(n); aap kay leeay!

Hai(n) yeh khyaalo(n) kay; timtimaathay dheeay!

Ayk shaairaa kervtay(n) lay rahee hai!

Khyaalay oulfuth may(n) jee rahee hai!

Humm hai(n) ndhaan, humm hai(n) ndhaan!

Thoo hai Meharbaan, thoo hai Meharbaan!

Th-oo hai Dhaathaa, subh hai(n) Thayray dher kay swaalee!

Saaree Koudhruth, haiThayree; Th-oo subh kaa hai Maalee!

Buss ik hee dhooaa hai Th-ayray Dher pay O' Maulaa!!

Ouskee jholee khousheeo(n) say bhurdhay Thoo Maulaa!!

Th-ayree rehmuth say hothay hai(n) such-ay subh suppnay!

'Kaadher'; nahee(n) gai-r koee, subh hai(n) upnay hee upnay!", a few verses from a poem of Dr. Singh

With dearest regards and best wishes for a happy and prosperous new year!

No desire for points, cheer up a desrving soul!

For the first lines yes, they are nice.

The others, I have no idea what that means

Not nice.

Well Dosti has to express here to decide?

Very nice..am not a expert in suggesting changes,i like it as it is :).

Agree with shiva ..nice lines as always :)

very nice...

may tumhre padya ko Fida hogaya...

feel free to ask me your doubts & my mail id: princeavin@yahoo.com

Very very nice. Who has stolen your heart.

So nice, I am reminded of a song :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cbMCNRvmnrc

nice