What do you guys thing about this poem?

I found this poem but I edited it to fit the situation, the last two parts before the "Well my dear I wish you Happy Birthday once more" I made up myself. I don't know the date of her birthday yet, but should know tomorrow. I have known her for the past year we have worked together. The point im trying to get across is that I would like to go out with her some day. I asked her out a few weeks ago but turned me down because she wants to keep her work life and personal life separate, which I understand. Im just trying to be persistent to show how much I want to be in her life. I plan on writing this on a birthday card.

Happy Birthday Karleena,

Your special day has come by again.

Im sure you had much fun the last time around,

I hope family and happiness is what you found.

Each year [Insert date] is a wonderful day,

As we march forth in our own fun way.

Just hanging around and laughing a lot,

It is truly amazing what we have got.

A friendship like ours is not easy to come by,

Often the intensity of it makes me so high.

Is our beautiful friendship really only a dream?

Sometimes it feels so unreal that I must scream.

Cries of joy and happiness galore,

And that is what I most adore.

Your infectious laughter and zest for life,

Is what keeps me going day after day.

How lucky we are to have found one another,

I couldn't spend so much time with any other.

I will always be there to watch over you,

To keep you safe and happy too.

I know your life is full of stress right now.

I see reasons why and I wonder, how?

How your able to handle all this stress.

I know you do all this to reach success.

But sometimes you need someone there to caress you.

And when you need someone to listen to you and support you,

I'll be that person who will be there to suppress your sadness.

More or less what im trying to say is, when your ready. Ill be waiting.

Well my dear I wish you Happy Birthday once more,

An abundance of good wishes for you are in store.

A new year filled with lots of happiness and laughter,

And only the very best for you from here on after.