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My poem, opinions and criticism?
What story do you get from my poem? Constructive criticism. Opinions.
Boy meets girl. Vulnerable.
Carefully I choose every word.
Thoughtfully.
For every word has a different meaning.
Unique.
Cautious about what I say next, for is it the right thing to say?
Doubtful.
I'll never know until the words are spoken.
Speechless.
Do you trust me?
Issues.
I may ask, but wonder 'should I have said anything at all?'
Regret.
The answer that lays before me, may not be what I wanted to hear.
Disappointment.
Dying is easy, living is difficult.
Skeptical.
Leaving on my terms.
Poetic.
Die now, what did I live for?
Strive.
Keep going always moving forward.
Progress.
The future holds the unknown.
Knowledge.
Stop. Did you forget?
Shattered.
My guard is up, can't see my pain.
Distant.
Apologizing, admitting that you're wrong.
Charismatic
A kiss and a smile, life is beautiful.
Acceptance.
Love is the key to life.
Unlocked.
5 Answers
- 8 years agoFavorite Answer
I absolutely love this poem! You did a really good job! Seems very deep and almost emotional in a way =)
- ?Lv 45 years ago
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- Anonymous8 years ago
It's really good! I've never seen a poem like this, it's different. I like the way you describe the words.
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