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vorick6
vorick6 asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

What do you think of my poem?

The Shiny Watch

. people love th

. e shiny watch

. glistening in th

. sunlight but in

. the night the watch speaks

.of its thousand diamonds gleaming

. to the radiance and of its g

. olden hands

. forever kee

. ping time

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  • Veronica
    8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    I love it. Please read some of mine.

    http://acollectionofbigmoments.blogspot.com/

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    Your poem is nice one. I like this.

    I translate this in Russian language in the following for my some Russian friends; I think they will like your poem.

    Блестящий Смотреть

    . люди любят го

    . электронной блестящие часы

    . блестящие в го

    . солнечный свет, но в

    . В ночь часы говорят

    . его тысячи бриллиантов блестящие

    . в сиянии и ее г

    . старины руки

    . навсегда Ки

    . пинг

    Thank you.

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