Nice short poem what do you think?

Ok! This is a pretty good poem. The not-rhyming "turn" on every fourth line succeeds fine!.

The 4th stanza is supposed to be the "peak" of the poem (right?), but being keen and effective, failed in the second line (easy to repair). "deafening night" - too unreal. You should write: "and pulsar night"; "pulsar" refers to the light of the stars, and it adheres in there in a better way and the line has 4 syllables.

From blinding light

this pulsar night ("and vibrant night" will do, too)

The tree did fight

And stand its ground

Also:

So sit with me

Beneath this tree

That blissfully (<-- 4 syllables - apply in 1st stanza, too)

Became my home

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Bravo for the fresh and elaborated result in our (alas) pompous world of poetry.

NO! It is not a real poem. It's short but it isn't a poem this is a great brief poem Wind from the east will crisis you least Wind from the north will trumpet Go Forth Wind from the south will depart you in drouth Wind from the west will put you to rest.

simple, nice, good word choice. 7/10

i like it

relaxing luv it :)