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Thoughts on Sad Poem?
It is a re post, I know this is shocking but I only got one answer for my last post
Star it if you like it please :), let me know what you think, criticism positive or negative doesn't bother me
As per the last poster's answer, I have made a few changes
Seasons pass from hot to cold
The bitter wind calls out your name
And days grow bleak and long and old
This lonely house is not the same
The window sobs as raindrops fall
In silent taps against the glass
The darkened grey, consuming all
When will the rain begin to pass?
I sit alone, in darkness lay
Without your warmth and loving smile
A thousand deaths I'd die each day
If just to hold you for awhile
Reaching forward, path unknown
I grasp at straws too thin to pry
And though my love for you has grown
My heart has withered, left to die
oh yeah, I write some every once and awhile and post them
I used to write a lot in high school, but although I write them much less frequently, I think that they are of much higher quality than my old stuff
3 Answers
- ?Lv 78 years agoFavorite Answer
An exceptionally moving verse is your second, here.
Your last couplet is also deeply affecting...Will you write more?
To me, the most substantial and memorable poem of a feeling nature in several days.
Thank You.
- NonLv 58 years ago
Very clear message about grief and waiting for it to stop. I like the part about grasping at straws and the love has grown but left to die. Very sweet and sad.
- 8 years ago
It is sad but a well done poem.
I think, though the entire piece is fine, my fave two lines begin the last stanza.
