Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.
Trending News
Do you like this poem?
Hi, Please give your opinions and criticisms and say how it relates to you or whatever you want. I wrote it when I was 15, thanks.
She sits there
Weeping
Swallowed by her chair
She sits there
Lost
Her husband just gone
Her daughter; frustrated
She doesn't understand
She doesn't understand
No one understands.
From living in sin
To living alone
God is her only company
She's forever alone
She sits there
Weeping, Lost and Alone
Her husband just gone
Never to come home
2 Answers
- Anonymous8 years agoFavorite Answer
I read it thrice! The first time I'm like clearly it's sad. The second time I thought she repeats everything too much and there isn't enough to this poem. The third time I decided: It's good as is. Ok sure, let's be honest, the layout isn't fantastic and there is so much more you could have done, but that's not the point of this piece. If the reader takes the time to seriously take in what has happened - it does not matter how the words were written as long as the meaning was there. I felt the speaker's pain and that's all I needed. Good job.
