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Who would like to hear my new poem?

I know some people liked my poems so I thought I would post another one that I wrote recently

What is this rose without you,

If not cruelty and shame?

What pains in my heart I must go through

In the whispers that scream out your name

If I let go now you will be gone

The pedals will burry and die.

If I let go now it will be done

Without ever saying goodbye.

So I stand here now to give you my blessing,

Despite all my tears and my pain.

Because whenever life had me guessing

You were always my sun in the rain.

Goodbye my friend I love you so dearly

I'll miss you with all of my heart.

Though tears stop me now from seeing it clearly

I know that we'll meet when I part

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  • Anonymous
    8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Very adult.

    I read it twice--figuring that love has died.

    Physically died../the rose is where the intersections of love will re-appear.

  • 8 years ago

    Hallmark.

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    Truly lovely,one of the best I've ever heard

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