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Is this sentence correct?
The primary goal of this publication is to share work news, developments and initiatives within the XXXXXX Organization as well as serve as a tool for our team to get to know each other's professional and personal ongoing endeavors.
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- Newms34Lv 68 years ago
Suzanne's answer is actually LESS correct, as it contains an error in parallelism ("to provide" vs. "sharing").
Technically, yours does too. I'd suggest putting a "to" right before "serve":
The primary goal of this publication is to share work news, developments and initiatives within the XXXXXX Organization as well as to serve as a tool for our team to get to know each other's professional and personal ongoing endeavors.
While this isn't completely necessary (the "to" I suggest putting in is sort of implied), it eliminates any grammatical ambiguity.
Other than that, it's fine.
- Anonymous8 years ago
The goal of this publication is to provide the news, developments and initiatives within the XXXXXX organization while also sharing professional and personal endeavors.
