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hi, please rate my poem?
hi there, I know m not a good writer but please rate my poem and if you have any suggestion feel free to comment. thank you
I have to be honest with you, so please understand
When I first meet, I didn’t see any part of me in you
But then I saw you picture and I said this can’t be true
What a beautiful lady in a black and white picture that was you
In those picture, I saw your eyes, so amazing
It made me fall in love with you.
I knew you were special so I gave you my number
I wanted to know if this was real, so I gave you a call
We talk for the first time, we were both nervous
But luckily we got to talk and knew one another
Now I’m happy and I’m glad I took this chance
Because by chance I met another angel
Everyday when I don’t see you,
I count the seconds that we are apart.
The day seems so long but you’re in my heart.
I know this love might be distance and must be hard on us
But please be patient and don’t give up
I honestly want to tell you this, I want this more than anything
I want you more then any lady in this world
Cause in my heart, you’re my new world
I really do hope that you feel the same way
because I want to be with you forever and a day
2 Answers
- 8 years agoFavorite Answer
It's okay, very typical, been done a million times before, no original style. And rhyming poetry annoys me, I feel that it can sometimes limit what someone really has to say. No interesting language here either. I mean, I can tell it is of importance to you, but it comes across as a journal entry.
And it's very cheesy; not my thing.
- Anonymous8 years ago
it was really good mit made me think of my own life thank you can you please check out mine thanx