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Grammar: Please check if the sentence is observing parallelism?

"I aim to improve my communication skills, team building techniques and awareness of services."

I'm not sure if the words are parallel.

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  • 8 years ago
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    They are parallel. Each of the three things is a noun, something that you aim to improve. You can check for parallelism by repeating the sentence for each element to see if they all sound similar:

    I aim to improve my communication skills.

    I aim to improve my team building techniques.

    I aim to improve my awareness of services.

    A non-parallel construction would be something like:

    I aim to improve my communication skills, team building techniques and hope to give good service.

    That third element sounds wrong because it's not in parallel.

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