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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 8 years ago

Please rate my poem!?

The hopeful rope.

The rope of hope, the rope that could possibly eliminate my sorrows, hangs right in front of my face.

Yet, though it dangles weakly in front of my own eyes, I turn away.

The misery I have incurred puts me in a hypnotic trance.

But why is the rope so thin? I wonder.

I might die because of my lack of faith.

I am dead though I am alive.

But I wish it were the other way around.

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  • 8 years ago
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    BEAUTIFUL!!!

    I absolutely enjoyed it. You are gifted. To combine 2 opposite concepts in such a deep attractive clever way indicates a great talent, though I encourage u to follow the user name you chose to go by for life is hell without hope & optimism.

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    I think its beautiful and very descriptive about life :D

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