Plz read my poem and c/c it? do you like it?

Opened my door tonight, felt the one i was waiting for,

which called for my soul to return from the sunny shore,

i couldn't ask for more, while it was just a few steps away,

just kiss me on my lips, and stay for always.

Darkness in the nights will now wear white jewels,

they look so pretty when they are cold and cruel,

my lonliness stopped crying and is smiling again,

wait is almost over ,dear, winter is finally coming.

Take me on a ride, where i can be dead in snow,

fog give my eulogy and quiet carry my corpse,

give me my freedom, from the prison of summer,

sun is a felon, in the realm of this king.

Talking to silence in the winter nights,

beading my thoughts with pearls of ice,

chillness in my soul will wash away the fire,

the fire bothering me since i am alive.

We can go in calm , and shake our souls,

spill away all the chaos and refill it with void,

what a lotion winter brings which heals the dead souls,

along with her dark sword to cut through fake glows.

To welcome her you don't need flowers or fire,

just dark the lightness and sing in silence,

push yourself from the heights you have achieved,

get buried in the mist of truth and find the reality.

Just put your head in her lap, and she will sing you a lullaby,

you can kill those lizards in your in mind and she will be your alibi,

fill me with emptiness, and make me your heir,

may she gallop me in this time, and make me a part of her.